Positives
- Interesting and thought provoking
- Imagery is eye catching
- Good use and amount of text
- Good range of image based research
- Variation and range of products researched
- 'Nice' layout, presentable and professional
- Strong use of the grid
- Good, simple, clean layout, good use of white space
- Useful that the information is broken down into separate categories
Possible areas for improvement
- Reduce the amount of body copy in areas of the boards, this will maintain balance throughout the boards
- Number the boards
- Play around with the layout, it seems a bit dull to you usually do
- Label images along side them
- Check punctuation and spelling
- Image could all line up along the bottom
- Consider legibility of type when positioning it over images
- Consider how use of bold and regular affects how the text is read by the reader
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