Design For Print: Final Crit

Strengths:

• Good set of design sheets, really detailed, give a good ideas of what your thinking
• The colour orange is a good choice
• Cool illustrations, minimalistic but at the same time legible
• Set of six is a good idea
• Good layout not overcomplicated

Areas for Improvement:

• Thin line between simplicity and simplicity and can sometimes be confusing, to stripped down diagrams
• Digital print illustration needs work to be more understandable

Considerations:

• Physical mock up of the packaging, stock considerations, and how you would make it would have been nice to see
• Hierarchy is strong and makes the design flow smoothly, however more labelling on the diagrams would help 

As Group:

• Good research conducted
• Contents pages needs, they make the content easier to navigate
• Page numbers also help with the navigation of the publication
• Basic type skills need to be put into practice, leading, line spacing, widows etc.
• Proof reading all text

Action Plan:

• Proof read through all text, and adjust american spellings of words 
• Remove underline on text on the right pages of the booklets, currently inconsistent
• Add page numbers and then add these numbers to the contents page on the back cover